Hi,

I'm looking for a songwriter that can add a topline to this track.

The track is completely 'dry', so no reverbs or delays yet.

Hit me a PM!

Thanks

https://soundcloud.com/skind-3796198...social_sharing

And here's another one:

And another pop-rock. The second one is better sounding but since I have a compressor plugin still running in demo mode it leaves a white noise every now and then!

https://soundcloud.com/skind-3796198...social_sharing

https://soundcloud.com/skind-3796198...social_sharing

You would have better luck if the songs were in a standard song format and had differentiated verses, prechoruses, choruses etc.

And another pop-dance one:

Thanks, Tom, I'll try to keep my eye on that!

And another instrumental:

https://soundcloud.com/skind-3796198...social_sharing

Too many slivers of music mixed together. Pick one style for the song. Organize it into the song structure.

Another type:

https://soundcloud.com/skind-3796198...social_sharing

A more symphonic type of pop:

https://soundcloud.com/skind-3796198...social_sharing

Hey I just wandered across your thread and had a listen. Sounds great. It actually inspired me to finish some lyrics I had lying around on my phone. I think it might make a good match (perhaps with a few line adjustments). I wrote it with the pop-rock, Taylor swift style in mind. If you're still there, give it a try and let me know what you think. I have more lyrics that might suit this style if you're interested.
I normally write progressive rock and hard rock lyrics but some of my lyrics occasionally work with other genres.
Thanks.

OUT OF MY SYSTEM
v1:
I know very well you hate me
But who ever said I loved you?
Who ever said I looked your way?

v2:
You have to throw your faces
Why can't you just feel nothing
And go about a normal day?

chorus:
Get you out of my system...never wanted you there
Don't know how you drew such toxin
From a breath of fresh air

Please stay out of my system...I'm just trying to live
I don't want to dwell inside
Your inner narrative

v3:
There seems to be no strangers
In your world of accusations
Every face you give a storyline

v4:
You dish out your weak presumptions
But the tale spun in your head
Is nowhere near remotely close to mine

(chorus)

ukulele break:
Get out of my system
Get out of my day
You'd think you would quit it
When I'm walking away

drum bridge:
Who ever said I was hoping for connection?
My random glance? That's a nod in your direction?
I never knew my motions had such meaning
So tell me, what else are your powers gleaning?

(chorus)

© Michael Centra

I forgot to mention that this was the track of yours I finished my lyric for. I like your work. It truly suits that style of music.

Have Suno or Udio finish your songs for u.

Then you won't be able to copyright the song.