my first mix shared with you!!!!!
 

i just did a quick mix and threw a buss on vox and added reverb, I also added izotope ozone plugin at end as a mastering plugin but like i said song is not done it is just a qick mix to maybe get some help on stuff i could do.

Song kicks in at 20 seconds i pulled intro way down cause its not done and backing vocals are pulled way down and are not done.
So be patient song will kick in!!!!!!!

I think this singer is spending too much energy trying to sound "cool" instead of hitting the right notes.

i back that up with the singer.
the guitar has lotta mud.